Witajcie. W mojej kochanej szkole uczę się języka niemieckiego. A sis prosi mnie bym jej pomogła w napisaniu krótkiego wypracowania na temat kosmetyczki itp. Czy pomożecie mi sprawdzić błędy ? Hmm :) 
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I’m a beauty therapist.
My beauty salon offers a wide range of face treatments.
I make in my beauty salon massage and manicur.
I can make for my clients mineral clay. ( maseczka)
This mask good to nourish the skin.
This treatment to give good benefits. ( daje dobre korzyści )
To the right of the locker room there is a coat hanger.
Clients can hang their clothes.
I always give advises for my clients.
I have many diploma and courses.
In my beauty salon work only highly qualified staff.
My beauty salon has nicely equipment interior.
This job give me great satisfaction.
1. I make massage and manicur in my beauty salon.
2. I can make mineral clay for my clients.
3. This mask nourishes your skin (wydaje mi się, że tak będzie lepiej)
4. This treatment gives benefits (benefits to korzyści, więc raczej nie pisze się dobre korzyści :D)
5. There is a coat hanger on the right in the locker room.
6. Only highly qualified staff works in my beauty salon.
7. My ... has nice equipment...
8. this job gives me...
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I'ma beauty therapist.
My beauty salon offers a wide range of facial treatments.
In my beauty salon I do massages and manicures.
I can make clay minerals for my clients.
This is a good mask because it nourishes the skin.
This treatment has many good benefits.
To the right of the locker room there is a coat hanger on which the clients can hang their clothes.
I always give advise for my clients.
I have many and diploma courses. ??? (I have done many diploma courses)
Only highly qualified staff are employed in my beauty salon and the equipment is nice.
This job gives me great satisfaction.