Proszę o sprawdzenie mojego wypracowania angielskiego. BŁAGAM WAS, nie wiem gdzie zrobiłem błędy, jestem słaby z anglika.
I have exactly arrived to my house, safely and happily and I?m so cheerful of that. I want to thank you for your hospitality and for give me a hand. I don?t know what I would do without you.
I have never forget when we all were together on the lake. The best moment these day was when you make me a surprise for my seventeenth birthday, and tells ?best wishes!?. I didn?t think that you will remember it! I feel really pleasure. It was so nice to spend this day with your family.
What do you think about visit me in foremost time? I want to invite all of you to visit Poland this or next weekend. It?s up to you when. I will organize you interesting time and it will be my recompense for your hospitality. I really hope that you will agree and come.
I?ve been waiting for your answer.
dziękuję tym którzy pomogą
Sprawdzicie mi zadanie? Prosze!
Po pierwsze exactly to raczej potwierdzenie czyjejś wypowiedzi czy coś w tym stylu. Właśnie!
I have just come home - tak lepiej brzmi ;]
mi trochę nie bardzo jakoś się czyta , ale chyba gamatycznie dobrze
bez tego 'for give me a hand'
what I will going to do with you
I have never forgotten i teraz tak WHEN nie ma w present perfect simple ;]
about our time which we spend on the lake.
I have just arrived at my house, safely and happily and I?m so cheerful because of that. I want to thank you for your hospitality and for giving me a hand(helping me out). I don?t know what I would do without you.
I will never forget when we all were together by the lake. The best moment these day was when you made me a surprise for my seventeenth birthday, and gave best wishes!?. I didn?t think that you will remember it! I feel really delighted. It was so nice to spend this day with your family.
What do you think about visiting me in foremost time? I want to invite all of you to visit Poland this or next weekend. It?s up to you when. I will organize you an interesting time and it will be my recompense for your hospitality. I really hope that you will agree and come.
I am waiting for your answer.