Angielski..

hej. mam prośbę. mógłby ktoś sprawdzić, czy ten list jest napisany poprawnie? byłabym bardzo wdzięczna...

Dear xyz,
To begin with my letter I would like thank you for your letter. I'm sorry I'm haven't written for a long time.
I would like tell you about my summer holidays.
This year I went on a really cool holidays in Zakopane. I went there with my family: my mother, my father and my sister. We stayed in a hotl. This hotel was a swimming pool and a power station! It was great! We stayed in Zakopane for one week.
Most of the time we spent on the lake and in mountains. We were trying to visit as much interesting places as we could.
This holidays was really great.
I hope to see you soon! And please, contact with me! My telephone number is 500500500.

Best wishes,
xxx

To begin my letter, I would like to thank you for yours. Sorry to not written for a long time. I'd like to tell you about my holiday.
This year I went to a really cool holiday to Zakopane. I went there with my family: mother, father and sister. We stayed in a hotel.
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Most of the time spent at the lake in the mountains. We have visit the most interesting places.

chyba coś takiego, ale nie jestem pewna ;))

Firstly I would like to thank you for the letter you've sent me.


I'm sorry for not writing for such a long time.


This year, I've spent my holidays in Zakopane. It was really cool!


At the hotel there was a swimming pool and a power station!


Nie musisz pisać 'for one week' Wystarczy 'for a week'.


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bez 'with'

Możesz być na 99% pewna że poprawnie tu wszystko popoprawiałam.