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IfOnlyForYou
IfOnlyForYou
  8 May 2009 (pierwszy post)

hej. mam prośbę. mógłby ktoś sprawdzić, czy ten list jest napisany poprawnie? byłabym bardzo wdzięczna...

Dear xyz,
To begin with my letter I would like thank you for your letter. I'm sorry I'm haven't written for a long time.
I would like tell you about my summer holidays.
This year I went on a really cool holidays in Zakopane. I went there with my family: my mother, my father and my sister. We stayed in a hotl. This hotel was a swimming pool and a power station! It was great! We stayed in Zakopane for one week.
Most of the time we spent on the lake and in mountains. We were trying to visit as much interesting places as we could.
This holidays was really great.
I hope to see you soon! And please, contact with me! My telephone number is 500500500.

Best wishes,
xxx

RapMoimZyciem
RapMoimZyciem
  8 May 2009

To begin my letter, I would like to thank you for yours. Sorry to not written for a long time. I'd like to tell you about my holiday.
This year I went to a really cool holiday to Zakopane. I went there with my family: mother, father and sister. We stayed in a hotel.
(...)
Most of the time spent at the lake in the mountains. We have visit the most interesting places.

chyba coś takiego, ale nie jestem pewna ;))

PinaColada001
PinaColada001
  8 May 2009
Konto usunięte
Konto usunięte: To begin with my letter I would like thank you for your letter.

Firstly I would like to thank you for the letter you've sent me.

Konto usunięte
Konto usunięte: I'm sorry I'm haven't written for a long time.

I'm sorry for not writing for such a long time.

Konto usunięte
Konto usunięte: This year I went on a really cool holidays in Zakopane.

This year, I've spent my holidays in Zakopane. It was really cool!

Konto usunięte
Konto usunięte: This hotel was a swimming pool and a power station!

At the hotel there was a swimming pool and a power station!

Konto usunięte
Konto usunięte: We stayed in Zakopane for one week.

Nie musisz pisać 'for one week' Wystarczy 'for a week'.

Konto usunięte
Konto usunięte: Most of the time we spent on the lake and in mountains.

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Konto usunięte
Konto usunięte: And please, contact with me!

bez 'with'

Możesz być na 99% pewna że poprawnie tu wszystko popoprawiałam. :ziober2:
Dyskusja na ten temat została zakończona lub też od 30 dni nikt nie brał udziału w dyskusji w tym wątku.