anglik- spr

Bylabym bardzo wdzieczna gdyby ktos sprawdzil mi poniższe opowiadanie. Juz głupieje z tymi czasami :/

It was sunny Saturday afternoon. Family Robertson packed their suitcases on vacatio. From 4 p.m I was staying In front of their house. I watched what they doing. Of course from my hiding-place. I was a bit irritated, so I took my favouritte pipe and smoked. About 6 p.m the Family left hause. Then, I sneaked unnoticed to their house. With the help scrwdriver I was ente ring to house. Before I went to Centre, I had tucked Glover on oneself, because I don?t wanted stay my fingerptint. The whole week I was watching this Family and I knew where they had safe. Safe was situated behind big Picture In sleeping room. Next I begined to work- I took Picture, broke code and opened safe. That was Simple for me, because I done this many Times. Then I took Money and put they In my bag. Until I took this Money, I Heard screech openly lock. I fell In Panic. In big hurry I left this room througkt the window. I escaped, but my plan was damaged. I felt terrible. That was my first unsuccesful robbery

* vacation

*screwdriver


*entering


*gloves
Sorki za błędy...

na odwrot.


holidays


for holidays


i was standing


what were they doing


hidden place


house


help of the screwdriver


I enter the house.


zanim wszedlem do centrum ??


i put the gloves on my hands, because i didnt want to leave the fingerprints there.


it was situated behind the big Picture


in bedroom


then i started to work


i've done it


then i started putting the money in my bag.


but before i finished i heard the sound of opening the lock


i left the room through

na pewno jeszcze wielu 'the' ci nie dopisalam itp.
i nie wiem, cos mi nie pasuje w tym zdaniu:



eh, w kazdym badz razie chyba nie jest tak zle.
i chyba wszystko dobrze napisalam :)

I entered the house