BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85
  25 marca 2009 (pierwszy post)

tak jak w temacie.. mam list ktory na 100% trzeba poprawić bo nie znam angielksiego i pisze tak jak mi się napisze... wiec zaczynam :

Dear Sandra
I've got a problem. I'm realy concerned about my friend Ichigo.
He's playing games upon phone for hours on end. He's doing it everywhere- at school, at home even when we're in disco. Whole money which he has he buy a new game. He's forgeting about his friend . He isn't cleaning his room and he's failing of task. He lifes in virtual word. He stoped lern. Only games... Other then that he doesn't want to talk about the problem becouse he doesn't see it. When I'm talking to him He's roaring to me and he's speaking that isn't my business. We are friends.. I don't understand why he say this way....
I don't know what to do... His parents doesn't care him... Please help me!

ej tylko nie śmiejcie się za głośno z tych wypocin ;]
Pozdrawiam tych którzy tego chcą

Gejszalicious
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Gejszalicious
  25 marca 2009
BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: realy

really
BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: He's forgeting about his friend .

wydaje mi się, że lepiej będzie wyglądało He forgets about his friends
BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: He isn't cleaning his room

He doesn't clean his room
BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: He lifes in virtual word.

He lives in virtual world
BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: He stoped lern

He stopped learning

a dalej nie chcce mi sie sprawdzać
nie ręczę, że to jest w 100% dobrze poprawione
Aby osiągnąć szczęście, trzeba spełnić trzy warunki: być imbecylem, być egoistą i cieszyć się dobrym zdrowiem. Jeśli jednak nie spełnicie pierwszego warunku, wszystko jest stracone.
Gustaw Flaubert
BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85
  25 marca 2009
Gejszalicious
Gejszalicious: He doesn't clean his room

no w sumie to nawet ładniej brzmi

dzięki
Miihihih
Miihihih
  25 marca 2009
i pamiętaj, że list na maturze musi miec min. 108 słów ;>
także lepiej pisać I have zamiast I've, He is zamiast He's.
Coach06
Coach06
  26 marca 2009
BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: at school

in school

Gejszalicious
Gejszalicious: Whole money which he has he buy a new game

For whole money which he has , he buys new games .

Gejszalicious
Gejszalicious: He's forgeting about his friend . wydaje mi się, że lepiej będzie wyglądało He forgets about his friends

Jej wersja byla do przyjecia tylko ze friends

BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: becouse

because

BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: that isn't my business

that's not my business

BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: why he say this way....

napisz why he acts this way

BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: His parents doesn't care him

His parents don't care about him

To by było tyle + to co napisala Gejszalicious :)
Caliburn69
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Caliburn69
  26 marca 2009
BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: Whole money which he has he buy a new game

wg mnie powinno byc: he spends all his money on new games.

BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: Other then that

other than than

BlueBerry85
BlueBerry85: He's roaring to me

mysle ze powinno byc roaring at me

no to chyba juz wszystko ;]

Im/...^(.V.)^...Im/
"when you have noone, noone can hurt you" Katatonia

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