ShinyStern
ShinyStern
  24 marca 2009 (pierwszy post)

mialam opisac swoje tegoroczne wakacje, sprawdzi ktos:)

On last holiday i was in a peregrination. My sister, my friends and me were going to Czestochowa. We had going since 9 days. Each night we spend in another place. The wander began in Tarnow. First night I slept on my house, because campsite was near from my house. The second day was pretty good. We slept in new house, bat inside it wasn?t furnished. On the third day We walked around 30 km! I was tired but I thought I got a nice house to sleep. Unfortunately I must slept in not renovate house. House hadn?t got a windows and doors. that day weather was wonderful. Sun was shining. After the whole day I wanted to wash me, but in this house hadn?t got a running water! So, my sister and me went to barn. We got a bucket of water and we somehow washed up. Next day I don?t remember. 5 day group 7 was exceeded province of Malopolska and we was found in province of swietokrzyskim. That night I sleep quite nice. I slept on the same house 2 years ago. 6 day wasn?t interesting. When I thought about return to house. In night We slept in barn. That night we must woke up on 3 o?clock a.m.! whole night was raining. Water was dripping from the roof. It was very funny. Next day shoe my friends has broken. And she was going barefoot. The 8 night we slept under the open sky. And next day we were in Czestochowa. It?s a beautiful city. I recommend each to go to peregrination. It?s unforgettable experience

z gory dzieki!

Coach06
Coach06
  24 marca 2009
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For my last holiday I was..

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My sister , friends and I ...

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We were peregrinating for 9 days .

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Every night we spent ...

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... in my house , because the campsite was near to my house

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but

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I had to sleep in unrenovated house

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The house didn't have neither windows nor doors

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The sun ..

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I wanted to wash myself , but that house didn't have running water !

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So we had to go to barn.

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and we've reached the province of Swietokrzyskie

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That night I slept quite nice .

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in the same

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Wywal when i return home.

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That night ..

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We had to wake up at 3 o'clock

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It was raining whole night

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The next day my friend's shoe broke , so that she had to go barefoot .

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And next day we finally reached Czestochowa .

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Every one should go to such peregrination because it is an unforgetable experience .

Ludzie no tyle bledow ze szok ... ale nic to , na zdrowie :)
Caliburn69
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Caliburn69
  24 marca 2009
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we spent every night...

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The house didn't have windows nor doors

wg mnie tak powinno byc ;]

Im/...^(.V.)^...Im/
"when you have noone, noone can hurt you" Katatonia

Coach06
Coach06
  24 marca 2009
Caliburn69
Caliburn69: The house didn't have neither windows nor doors The house didn't have windows nor doors

To jest akurat dobrze na 100 % ...
Coach06
Coach06
  24 marca 2009

mam namysli moja wersje .. z neither i nor

Caliburn69
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Caliburn69
  25 marca 2009

jesli jednoczesnie neither i nor to powinno byc:
The house had neither windows nor doors

Im/...^(.V.)^...Im/
"when you have noone, noone can hurt you" Katatonia

Coach06
Coach06
  25 marca 2009

NIe no fakt z tym sie zgodze :) moja kulpa :D

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