ShinyStern
ShinyStern
  3 marca 2009 (pierwszy post)

witam! mialam napisac artyukl o pewnym kolesiu, o to moja praca:

Last weekend i have pleasure tell with Brayan Johnston. In his life he was doing more career, Around 20. He was starded as a shop assistan. But he didn't work them a long time. Because he thought this is very boring job. Next he work as a librarian. He didn't complain for this work because, he loves books. Then he called in army. He was a soldier for 2 years. After that he stared work in factory as a cleaner. Next he was a worker, security guard and even a secretary. He worked long hours at the factory for most of the year. after 10 years a new manager fired more people with him too. Brayan is a hard working person. In holiday he worked in seaside as a waiter to earn extra money. usually More people in this time rest. In my opinion Brayan has got very interesting remembrances .

sprawdzi ktos:)??

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i33iiiiiiiee
  3 marca 2009
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i had a pleasure to talk to Brayan Johnston - mialem/mialam przyjemnosc rozmawiac z Brayan'em Johnston'em.

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Konto usunięte: In his life he was doing more career, Around 20. He was starded as a shop assistan.

In his life he was mostly interested in his career and this was around 20. He started as a shop assistant.

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there.

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After that he worked as a librarian.

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Konto usunięte: he loves books.

loved*.

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then he went in army.

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fired more people including him too.

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at*

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just as a lot of people at this time.
ShinyStern
ShinyStern
  3 marca 2009
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Konto usunięte: ShinyStern: he loves books.loved*.

ale on caly czas kocha czytac a nie tylko wtedy,

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Konto usunięte: i had a pleasure to talk to Brayan Johnston - mialem/mialam przyjemnosc rozmawiac z Brayan'em Johnston'em.

o to mi chodzilo

dziekuje:))
i33iiiiiiiee
i33iiiiiiiee
  3 marca 2009
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Konto usunięte: ale on caly czas kocha czytac a nie tylko wtedy,

aha ,no chyba ze tak.
ale to nie ma sensu jesli przeplata sie rozne czasy w zdaniach ,dlatego zmienilam:)
ShinyStern
ShinyStern
  3 marca 2009
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Konto usunięte: aha ,no chyba ze tak. ale to nie ma sensu jesli przeplata sie rozne czasy w zdaniach ,dlatego zmienilam:)

rozumiem:)
bardzo dziekuje:)
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