j angielski

proszę o poprawienie błędow.

Mark wracal do domu, kiedy znalazl duzą brązowa paczkę.
Zadzwonił na policję.

Mark was going to home, when he find a large brown parcel. He called to police.

Jego żona byla zmartwiona, poniewaz nie wiedziala gdzie on jest

His wife was feeling worry because she wasnt't know were he is.


Mark wrocil do domu i powiedzial swojej zonie co sie stalo.?
Mark was backing to home, and he said his wife what he do?

Kiedy wszedl do sypialni zadzwinla policja i powiedzieli, ze w tej paczce znajduje sie pistolet
when he went into bedroom The police was calling to Mark and they said that In the package was gun

found


He called police


she didn't know


nie może byc past continuous, to nie jest czynnosc ciągła..
Mark came back to home, and told his wife what was happening


The police called Mark and said that in the package was a gun.

dziekuje;-DD

Mark was going back home, when he found a large bown package. He called the police.


His wife was worried because she didn't know where he was.


Mark came back home and told his wife what has happened.


When he walked into the bedroom ,police rung him and they said that there was a gun in a package.