angielski ;p

It was a beautiful spring day.Weather was fantastic, so together with my friends decided go to forest. We want to started at 2 o' clock. George, Tina and I took a lot of foods, orange juice and blanket. After dinner we set off. At 3 o'clock we were on wonderful forest clearing. We were sitting and began eating. It was really great. Next we were joking. Suddenly Tina was slipping on banana peel and she sprained her leg.
-"oh no"- shouted Tom. We must come back home, but how? Tina has got a sprain leg and she isn't going. What are we doing now?
We hadn't no idea. In adition it was getting dark. My two friends and I felt hot and exhausted. Tina wasn't walk. It was horrible. Suddenly we were earing terrifying noises. It was coming from behind buhes. We didn't know what's this. Probably it was a tiger. It rearing loudly when the tiger was near us i noticed that it had six legs.
-Hello said tiger. At the moment we were recognizing that it's Mark, our friend.

mógłby mi ktoś sprawdzić błędy?? PILNE

a nie czasem:
wanted to start?

Powinno być: George, Tina and me. Poza tym może być, nie widzę nic wiecej.

so together with my friends we decided to go to the forest.


We wanted to start at 2 o'clock.


food


What are we going to do now?


We had no idea.


Tina wasn't walking


Suddenly we heard terrifying noise.


bushes (?? )


We didn't know what it was.


Tego nie rozumiem...


At this moment we recognized that it was Mark, our friend.

to miało być "ryknął głośno"... widocznie źle przetłumaczyłam...

It roar loudly

ROAR - ryk.

ma byc:
It roar loudly. When the tiger was near us i noticed that it had six legs.
- dwa zdania, nie jedno :D

roared...
zapomnialam, ze to ma byc czas przeszly :D

Dzięki wielkie ;D Poprawiłam błedy i biorę sie za drukowanie

so Me and my friends decided go to the forest together.



We wanted to start



George, tina and me



We were sitting and we were eating



Tina slipped on the banana`s peel



We have to



she cannot go



what will we do now?



We didn`t have an idea.

Dalej nie mam juz czasu ale bledy sa.

Friends we decided =]