Angielski

Pomocy xD czy ktoś mógłby mi sprawdzić owe wypraciwanie ??

At first I went with My sister on shopping.
When we returned, Our mum cooked dishes.
Feed was very excellent.
I have invited my friends on my birthdays.
I like them very.

My birthdays have proceeded In center of culture day 14 november in Pasłęku.
My birthdays lasted for white morning.
Friend give me beautiful presents.
Mascots , flowers and many Jewelry .
My parents give me money.

I with my sister cut cake
My friends wished me a lot health and luck.
We gone to dance.
We sang on karaoke.
Birthdays were great.
I was satisfied from my 18 birthdays.

ęłęóAtmosphere was very nice.
Damage, that birthdays is celebrated
once in life .

Błąd przy kopiowaniu ^^

Mam nadzieję, że nie przepiszesz tak samo tego wypracowania
( w sensie linijka pod linijką ? ) ;]

- są błędy. nawet wiele błędów - poczekaj na pomoc od kogoś
mam pracę więc zbytnio czasu brak - nie przepisuj tego co masz bo dostaniesz 2+

Nie... bd pisać w ciągu...
Wiem, ze mam błędy jak zawsze hehe xD
Dlatego poczekam na pomoc xD

At the begining I went shopping with my sister.
When we returned we helped our mom out with prepearing dishes.
Food was very tasty. I have invited my friends to my birthday party because
I like them very much.

My birthday party took it's place in our city culture center at 14 of november.
Party lasted till early morning.
My Friends gave me beautiful presents.
Mascots , flowers and many Jewelry while my parents gave me money.
Everyone wished me a lot of health and luck.

I with my sister cut cake
My friends wished me a lot health and luck.
We danced and played karaoke all night long.
Birthdays were great.
Im satisfied with my birthday party.
It's sad that 18 th birthday is one in a lifetime experience.

tak chyba bd good xD xD

First I went shopping with my sister.
zla kolejnosc.


Food was excellent. /lub/ food was very good.


i have invited my friends for my birthday.


i really like them.


Pasłęko :]


my birthay lasted till the morning.


firends gave me beautiful presents.


teddies, flowers and a lot of jewellery.

my parents gave me the money.


my and mi sister have cutted the cake.


we went dancing.



1. we sang the karaoke.
2.the birthday was great.
3. i was satisfied about my 18th bithday.



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Unlucky that we only celebrate our birtday once a year.
lub
Unlucky that we only celebrate our 18th birthday once in our life.

cut, cut, cut... druga forma tabelki !! się kłania xD :PPP

Tu bd bez Have xd pani spr