SmallGirls
SmallGirls
  26 listopada 2008 (pierwszy post)

Pomocy xD czy ktoś mógłby mi sprawdzić owe wypraciwanie ??

At first I went with My sister on shopping.
When we returned, Our mum cooked dishes.
Feed was very excellent.
I have invited my friends on my birthdays.
I like them very.

My birthdays have proceeded In center of culture day 14 november in Pasłęku.
My birthdays lasted for white morning.
Friend give me beautiful presents.
Mascots , flowers and many Jewelry .
My parents give me money.

I with my sister cut cake
My friends wished me a lot health and luck.
We gone to dance.
We sang on karaoke.
Birthdays were great.
I was satisfied from my 18 birthdays.

ęłęóAtmosphere was very nice.
Damage, that birthdays is celebrated
once in life .

SmallGirls
SmallGirls
  26 listopada 2008
SmallGirls
SmallGirls: ęłęóAtmosphere was very nice.

Błąd przy kopiowaniu ^^
Ajra
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Ajra
  26 listopada 2008

Mam nadzieję, że nie przepiszesz tak samo tego wypracowania
( w sensie linijka pod linijką ? ) ;]

- są błędy. nawet wiele błędów - poczekaj na pomoc od kogoś
mam pracę więc zbytnio czasu brak - nie przepisuj tego co masz bo dostaniesz 2+

spread my wings and fly hold my head up high
SmallGirls
SmallGirls
  26 listopada 2008

Nie... bd pisać w ciągu...
Wiem, ze mam błędy jak zawsze hehe xD
Dlatego poczekam na pomoc xD

SmallGirls
SmallGirls
  26 listopada 2008

At the begining I went shopping with my sister.
When we returned we helped our mom out with prepearing dishes.
Food was very tasty. I have invited my friends to my birthday party because
I like them very much.

My birthday party took it's place in our city culture center at 14 of november.
Party lasted till early morning.
My Friends gave me beautiful presents.
Mascots , flowers and many Jewelry while my parents gave me money.
Everyone wished me a lot of health and luck.

I with my sister cut cake
My friends wished me a lot health and luck.
We danced and played karaoke all night long.
Birthdays were great.
Im satisfied with my birthday party.
It's sad that 18 th birthday is one in a lifetime experience.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls
  26 listopada 2008

tak chyba bd good xD xD

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XxI3aB3yb33xX
  26 listopada 2008
SmallGirls
SmallGirls: At first I went with My sister on shopping.


First I went shopping with my sister.
zla kolejnosc.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: Feed was very excellent.

Food was excellent. /lub/ food was very good.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: I have invited my friends on my birthdays.

i have invited my friends for my birthday.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: I like them very.

i really like them.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: Pasłęku.

:woot: :woot: Pasłęko :]

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: My birthdays lasted for white morning.

my birthay lasted till the morning.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: Friend give me beautiful presents.

firends gave me beautiful presents.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: Mascots , flowers and many Jewelry .

teddies, flowers and a lot of jewellery.
XxI3aB3yb33xX
XxI3aB3yb33xX
  26 listopada 2008
SmallGirls
SmallGirls: My parents give me money.


my parents gave me the money.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: I with my sister cut cake

my and mi sister have cutted the cake.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: We gone to dance.

we went dancing.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: We sang on karaoke. Birthdays were great. I was satisfied from my 18 birthdays.


1. we sang the karaoke.
2.the birthday was great.
3. i was satisfied about my 18th bithday.

SmallGirls
SmallGirls: Damage, that birthdays is celebrated once in life .


:wtf: ????
moze chodzilo Ci o:
Unlucky that we only celebrate our birtday once a year.
lub
Unlucky that we only celebrate our 18th birthday once in our life.
SmallGirls
SmallGirls
  27 listopada 2008
Konto usunięte
Konto usunięte: cutted the cake.

cut, cut, cut... druga forma tabelki !! się kłania xD :PPP
SmallGirls
SmallGirls
  27 listopada 2008
Konto usunięte
Konto usunięte: i have invited

Tu bd bez Have xd pani spr
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