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NacpanaMuzykax3
NacpanaMuzykax3
  24 November 2008 (pierwszy post)
Bry :pavarotti:
Chciałabym, abyście sprawdzili mi czy mam poprawne te zdania ;)
Z góry dziękuję :calusek:

The Great Fire of London happened again yesterday but it wasn't happy in London.
The fire was in south-west of England and it wasn't an accident.
Dave Kelly, 59, and his friends spent to years building a copy of London in 1666. 'We didn't built all the city of course, 'Dave said, 'just a small part of it around Pudding Lane. 'We didn't has time to do more.' Dave spent hours in the Museum of London. 'We didn't go to make any mistakesm,' he said. The fair didn't last four dayes, just a faw minutes, but 20,000 people came to see it. Last year Dave and his friends built a copy of a ship and church and burnt them. 'But they weren't as exciting as this.; Dave said.


Chodzi mi najbardziej o te słowa na czerwono.
XxI3aB3yb33xX
XxI3aB3yb33xX
  24 November 2008
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co to mialo oznaczac? bo 'wasnt happy in london' nie ma sensu.

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bez 'of '

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czy tu mialo byc 'two years' ?

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'we didn't build'

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we didn't HAVE time

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ocb?
moralnyodlot
moralnyodlot
  25 November 2008
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ja bym napisała such a good time

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