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Jest to recenzja filmu Mamma Mia. Co można dodać, poprawić?
The last film I've seen was Mamma Mia. I watched it in the cinema last month.
It was musical whos director is Phyllida Lloyd. The plot is rather interesting:
A woman has got a little hotel. She's single mother. Her daughter going to get married soon and she wants to meet her father. Girl sends letters to three men who were in relationships with her mother. She meets them and still don't know who is her father.
I liked this movie because the sountrack was amazing. There were in the film only ABBA's songs. Actors acted grandly, specially Meryl Streep who acted main character and Pierce Brosnan because in my opinion he's one of the best acotrs.
I can recommend this movie all off fans of musicals and old good music like ABBA/
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milenkaa26: It was musical whos director is Phyllida Lloyd.
It was the musical directed by Phyllida Lloyd.
milenkaa26: She's single mother.
She's a single mother.
milenkaa26: Her daughter going to get married soon and she wants to meet her father.
Her daughter is going to get married soon and she wants to meet her father, but she don't know, who he is.
milenkaa26: Girl sends letters to three men who were in relationships with her mother.
Girl sends letters to the three men who were in relationships with her mother around the time she was conceived.
milenkaa26: who acted main character
who was the main character
milenkaa26: acotrs.
actors :)
milenkaa26: this movie all off fans of musicals and old good music like ABBA/
this movie to all of the fans of musicals and good old music like ABBA.
Hmm... Na początek - czejść 
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W tekście jest niekonsekwencja czasowa. Raz piszesz 'the film was', zaraz potem 'the plot is'. Musisz się zdecydować ;).
milenkaa26: It was musical whos director is Phyllida Lloyd.
'whose' możesz używać tylko w odniesieniu do osób.
Ja osobiście zmieniłbym na stronę bierną - musical which was/is directed by Phillida ...
milenkaa26: A woman has got a little hotel.
One woman - tak bym zaczął ;-P (by wtedy było 'pewna', nie 'jakaś')
milenkaa26: little hotel
small hotel ('little' może być dziewczynka, nie hotel ;)
milenkaa26: Her daughter going to get married soon and she wants to meet her father.
albo 'is going to get married soon', albo 'soon gets married', albo 'soon will get married' ;P
(w zależności co chcesz napisać - ma zamiar wkrótce wziąć ślub, wkrótce bierze ślub czy wkrótce weźmie ślub; nie wiem, filmu nie oglądałem ;p)
milenkaa26: Girl sends letters to three men who were in relationships with her mother.
The girl sends the letters to the three ... in the relationship ...
milenkaa26: and still don't know
doesn't know :>
milenkaa26: There were in the film only ABBA's songs
Szyk.
There were only ABBA's songs in the film.
milenkaa26: Actors acted grandly
okazale? Ja bym zmienił przymiotnik :>.
milenkaa26: who acted
Tu możesz użyć innego czasownika. 'play', 'perform' np.
milenkaa26: in my opinion
Przed i po tym wyrażeniu przecinki.
milenkaa26: I can recommend this movie all off fans of musicals and old good music like ABBA/
I recommend (bo w sumie po co 'can'?) this movie to all of the fans of the musicals and good old music like ABBA's.
Konto usunięte: she wants to meet her father, but she don't know, who he is.
Chyba lepiej by brzmiało 'because she DOESN'T know him' ;).
Konto usunięte: and good old music like ABBA.
ABBA nie jest muzyką, tylko zespołem ;). Więc nijak może być 'music like ABBA'.
Konradziq: Chyba lepiej by brzmiało 'because she DOESN'T know him' ;).
kuva, wiem, nie wiem czemu tak napisalam
Konradziq: ABBA nie jest muzyką, tylko zespołem ;). Więc nijak może być 'music like ABBA'.
ABBAs o literke sie czepiasz
milenkaa26: dzięki wielkie Aga :))
nmzc :)