LukasMSC
LukasMSC
  8 stycznia 2009 (pierwszy post)

Jest pewien problem, a dokładniej mam małe problemy z napisaniem wypracowania...
Tzn coś tam napisałem, ale nie mam pojecia czy czasy dobre są - zawsze z gramatyki nie bardzo :zonk: Jeśli mógłby mnie trochę naprowadzić, wskazać błędy albo coś byłbym bardzo wdzięczny. :tak:
Dobra to jest ta praca:

American History X was created In 1998 and In 1999 won nomination to prize of Oscar.
Polish name of this film is ?prisoner of hatred?
Black n white scenes of the film adds id same climate.
The story of that film advocates about young (20-25 years old) neo-Nazi ? Derek Vinyard and his younger brother (16-17 years old)? Danny, Daniel, who went in the footsteps of his brother.
Derek was a leader of a group of skinheads. He was a big racialist and he combated all other human race. He was hated Afro-Americans cause once day his father ? fireman was killed by nigger. One day his car became the target of the car theft. Derek brutally black thieves and he went to prison for three years. In prison he got in block of blacks and his hatred to black people increased. In the prison he met other skinheads and he held with them. He got a job as a sorter underwear. In that prison job he met a black man and over the time he liked him.
Derek slowly changed his attitude to Afro-Americans. When the group of skinheads saw that Vinyard made friends with that man they brutally rape him under prison showers.
That event made it that he has changed beyond recognition. Friendship with his partner in work was stronger than before. When he returned from prison, it turned out that his younger brother ? Daniel was involved in the activities of racist organizations. Derek tried to dissuade his brother from the same error, that he has committed. Daniel doesn?t understand why his older brother has changed, but Derek told him everything what happened in the prison. They started a new life ? Danny went to school and Derek found a normal job. At the end of the film Daniel was shot by black contemporary in school toiled. I remember the last scene which is splatter blood on face of killer. American History X is one of the best films that I watched.

LukasMSC
LukasMSC
  8 stycznia 2009

Ohoh, to mi ładnie pomogliście - dzięki :zonk: :and:

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ThatxGirl
  8 stycznia 2009
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Cytat: American History X was created In 1998 and In 1999 won nomination to prize of Oscar.


American History X was created in 1998
In 1999 it won nomination ti win the Oscar.
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ThatxGirl
  8 stycznia 2009
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Cytat: Polish name of this film is ?prisoner of hatred?

Polish name of this film is prisoner of hatred ( nie jestem pewna)

nie widzialam tego filmu
i33iiiiiiiee
i33iiiiiiiee
  8 stycznia 2009
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who followed his brother's footsteps.

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Derek was a leader of a skinhead's group.

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He was hating Afro-Americans because one day his father was killed by a nigger.

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yy?? moze..
Derek was brutally thieving from niggers and he went to prison for three years.
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ThatxGirl
  8 stycznia 2009
American History X was created in 1998
In 1999 it won nomination ti win the Oscar.
Polish name of this film is prisoner of hatred ( nie jestem pewna)
Black and white scenes of the film add its own climate.
The story of that film tell us about young (20-25 years old) neo-Nazi ? ( ? )
Derek Vinyard and his younger brother (16-17 years old)? Danny, Daniel, who followed footsteps of his brother.
Derek was a leader of a group called skinheads.
He was a big racialist and he combated all other human race.
He hated Afro-Americans because one day his father who worked as a fireman was killed by nigger.
After a while his car was the target of the car theft. Derek brutally killed (zabil ich?) black thieves and he went to prison for three years.
In the prison he was put into a block with black people and his hate to black people increased even more.
In the prison he met other skinheads and he held with them.
He got a job as a underwear sorter.
In that prison job he had he met a black man and over the time he started to like him.
Derek slowly changed his attitude to Afro-Americans.
When the group of skinheads saw that Vinyard made friends with that man they brutally raped him under prison showers.
That event made it that he has changed beyond recognition. ( nie w tym zdaniu duzo sensu lepiej skasuj :P)
Friendship with his partner in work were stronger than before.
When he returned from prison it turned out that his younger brother Daniel was involved in the activities of racist organizations.
Derek tried to save his brother from making the same mistake he did. Daniel doesn't understand why his older brother has changed, but he told him about everything what happened in the prison. They started a new life Danny went to school and Derek found a normal job. At the end of the film Daniel was shot by black contemporary in school toiled. I remember the last scene which is splatter blood on killers face. American History X is one of the best films that I have watched.


Nie jestem pewna o wszystkie zdania czy dobrze ale mialam tylko 10 min zeby to ci szybko sprawdzic...
i...nigdy nie ogladalam tego filmu wiec...
LukasMSC
LukasMSC
  8 stycznia 2009

Derek brutally killed (zabil ich?) black thieves and he went to prison for three years. Tak.
Dzięki za cokolwiek, film na prawdę fajny, ale z opisaniem jego przeze mnie już dużo gorzej... Dostosuje się i poprawię ;]

i33iiiiiiiee
i33iiiiiiiee
  8 stycznia 2009
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In prison he got to the block where all the niggers were and his hatred to black people increased.
LukasMSC
LukasMSC
  8 stycznia 2009
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Sorka mały błąd, zjadłem wyraz :) TAm nie chodzi o to, że okradł murzynów, tylko że ich zabił...
i33iiiiiiiee
i33iiiiiiiee
  8 stycznia 2009
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aa ok^^

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wiec wrzuc tam tylko 'killed' pomiedzy ''brutally' a 'black' i bd giteZ:]
LukasMSC
LukasMSC
  8 stycznia 2009
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no oryginalnie w zeszycie jest, ale jak pisałem to coś pomieszałem :)
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